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"Her eyes are as black as crows..."
"What kind of crows?"
"The ones which peck at corpses."
"Intriguing. Here, I'll hit her with the baseball bat, you record what happens."


Trying to get out of drawing anime/manga style with some stock usage. Would appreciate all USEFUL critiques =3 I'm not very good at this kinda painting in photoshop xD

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Cassie/Carrie (c) Me

Critiques


:iconkaazuma-sama:
Digital painting is no walk in the park, and I think you've approached the medium well.

What immediately draws the audience in are the eyes. They embody the character boldly, and appear sharp alongside the skin, which appears to be glowing. You took advantage of your light source exceptionally well; I love the shadows that seem to just dance across her face. However, the hair should respectively been slightly brighter if her face could catch that much light.

I'm impressed that you've adapted to painting this well. The shading is exquisite, and molds her face anatomy very accurately. There are only a couple areas where you might have wanted to use your smudge tool again, but it's not an absolute necessity.

Overall, you've taken a very good advance to digital painting, which significantly exceeds the expectations of any beginner. Keep it up! c:
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:iconevilflippy:
very nice :)

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~Evil Flippy
:iconevilflippy:
and pretty :)

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Would you like to play..come play with me..play..play..PLAY!COME PLAY WITH ME MY CHILD!COME PLAY WITH MEEEEE!!!

~Evil Flippy
:iconfull-metal-spirit112:
Holy crap!

My God, Ava, do you have any idea how amazing this is?! Seriously, when I saw this in my 'New Deviations' thing, I didn't even know it was yours until I looked at your name! This came out so wonderful!!! Her eyes are friggin' creepy though, but I love it!!!

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"We are all a little weird and life's a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love."
:iconthepiratebat:
I like it :'D better than anything I could do d:

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FANGS UP; COBRA STYLE!
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:iconpopcorncomics:
Thankyou =]
And don't say that, I'm pretty sure you can do just as well if you got photoshop >:3

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"So I took the shotgun off the wall.. And I fired two warning shots. Into his head..."
"And then he ran into my knife. He ran into my knife ten times."
:iconpopcorncomics:
Thankyou!

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"So I took the shotgun off the wall.. And I fired two warning shots. Into his head..."
"And then he ran into my knife. He ran into my knife ten times."
:iconpopcorncomics:
;_; You have no idea how happy this comment made me :'3
Thankyou >_< :hug:

And creepy eyes? Yeeeeeeessss *wappida wappida*

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"So I took the shotgun off the wall.. And I fired two warning shots. Into his head..."
"And then he ran into my knife. He ran into my knife ten times."
:iconthepiratebat:
I sucks at realistic-ness though |3

BAAAAW don't taunt me Dx

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FANGS UP; COBRA STYLE!
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:iconsparklytea:
I don't know what look you were going for here, but I like the eyes

Maybe next time with the skin try to gradually fade in the white a bit more so its not as abrupt.

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